The elevator doors made that ominous banging noise usually reserved for the entrance to a haunted house as the entire office went pitch black. "She's trapped in there with him," whispered Catherine, and, suddenly, a shot rang out in the stillness of the dark room.There was a bit of a delay in the sound of the body hitting the floor. I'd have to talk to the guy about that.
Okay, before the next prompt:
- There is no comma after "because".
- Via (preposition): By a route that touches or passes through; by way of (i.e. to fly to Japan via the North Pole). See? You weren't even close (also if you had said that, you would have used the word "via" instead of "i.e.")
I was at the local baby-juggling Olympics when disaster struck.
4 comments:
Ned, the baby watcher, accidentally opened the door to the where the babies were kept, so the babies then began to ATTACK!!!!
i'm terrible at making up stories and i only let teachers see them so sorry, but i won't be participating in any of this.
on a different note: i love the movie Sleepless in Seattle.
Okay, for some reason I don't like where this one is going, so I'm not going to enter.
i agree with kelly
i am not creative at all nd i don't feel like humiliating myself in front of all u ppl
however ur pictures are fun
Post a Comment