Sunday, October 22, 2006

"Close"


Chapter Five is done.

Bah.

19 comments:

Anonymous said...

YAY FOR SAM'S FUN STORYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ladeda
i'm bored are you abored?
i am boreeeeed
wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
pretty picture
bye

Raptor said...

Nice. I liked it, though I don't think hollowpoint bullets can expand to 18mm. You're going with my 9mm subsonic suggestion, right? 'Cause .45 hollowpoints might be able to (.45in = 11.4mm), but 100% expansion from any sort of handgun-sized caliber strikes me as highly unlikely.
Also, there is no way known to mankind to fit a shotgun in a purse. Even a sawed-off double-barreld shotgun is at least 8 inches long. You could definitely hide one of those under a coat, but not in a purse.

But enough of my technical nit-pickyness. This is getting really good! I can't wait to read what happens next!

You do know that, according to federal law, you must be at least 21 to purchase a handgun, right?

Anonymous said...

uh
that was really depressing. well the end. yeah

Ali said...

oh my god, WHY DO YOU KNOW SO MUCH ABOUT GUNS!?!?!?

Ali said...

and btw jedi_raptor, there are definatley purses that could fit a handgun, especially if you put it in the purse with the little hole thingy that the bullet comes out of facing the bottom of the purse.

Anonymous said...

guns not butter

Anonymous said...

he killed his own father!!!! sad.

to the last commenter... SNL???

who won the stoga game?

Abby said...

OH! another idea for a postly contest. You could post pictures of places in your house, and we would have to guess where they are. Winner gets a free post.

Anonymous said...

we won stoga game 34-7
poor them

Anonymous said...

AHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAH I THOUGHT THAT DOOR HINGE WAS A LIKE SUIT BAG COVERER THING!!

Raptor said...

Yes, ali, you could store a handgun in a purse. However, sam states that the woman put a shotgun in her purse. There's a big difference.

And as to why I know so much about guns, check my blog, specifically the post entitled "'how does jedi_raptor know so much about guns'-ali"

Anonymous said...

FYI:
it's not "the newsies"
it's just "newsies"
and that is the only impact i will have on the musical. except maybe going to see it.
oh, and nice story sam. except it's kind of freaking me out to think that the VOA has a gun.
also, that andrew knows so much about guns.

Anonymous said...

I was at PSU yesterday. They accepted me and I graduated with a total of less than 24 hours on campus.

Anonymous said...

ooodelally ooodelally golly, what a day.

Anonymous said...

with my name spelled wrong.

Anonymous said...

congrats jeff.

Abby said...

nonsense, you can so act, jon.

angie: oh my god, I LOVE ROBIN HOOD!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Dramatic irony, yes? Very effective. Good boy. This is really good. It's also a little disturbing- but in the good way, cause I guess you're trying to be disturbing. Nice prose, the way it's so *factual* adds creepiness to the story.

Anonymous said...

eh, it's not just you jon. i see your point, though it would sound ok, and more correct, should you say "being in newsies".