This picture: Mediocre.
Alright, so my experiment failed miserably. Apparently the only the only one who submitted a real idea was "7", but even he seemed a little confused.
We're going to try this one more time. The scene is in this format:
Scene #: Character
Scene # is the line number (this will be 1 for you). The Character is who is speaking.
The "thought process" is what the character was thinking as he said is line. For example:
If the thought process was "Please remove yourself from the door, as the building is on fire and I would dearly like to exit", the line could be "Get the @#%$ out of my way! Don't you see I'm on fire, you &%##?!?"
Understand? If not, we'll try something else tomorrow.
Okay. I'm giving you the character and his thought.
Please consider my point of view.