Monday, October 30, 2006

"Fade Away"



Chapter Seven

27 comments:

Abby said...

wow. that was dark.

poor Voah. I'm concidering joining the I-Hate-Rebecca club, as she totally helped tried to kill him (even if they ended up killing her anyways). What a sell-out.

...Although, maybe whoever it was would have killed her if she hadn't. It may be a bit much to say shame on you for not dying for your ex-boyfriend. huh. I'll have to think on that one.

Ali said...

i was depressed when i read that.



it didnt help.

Raptor said...

Oh man. This story gets more and more depressing. Sheesh. VOA's "life" really sucks.

MAKE IT HAPPY! NOW!

Raptor said...

One more thing...

Why the **** is his mother in jail? That's obviously self-defence (the psycho lady) and involuntary manslaughter (daddy dearist). Even with a weapons charge (illegal/unregistered handgun), and even if his mom took the fall (which wouldn't stick-watch CSI), she'd be out of jail in five years, tops. The kid would be in juvie until he was 21 and that'd be it. But 1st degree murder? What the... ?

Anonymous said...

Dude, this keeps getting darker and darker. But yet, it still manages to rock my socks. I still firmly stand by my belief though, Voah needs a hug. NOW.

Anonymous said...

too early to read. i'll read it later. ughhh. alarm got me up at three. i hate three. three sucks sooooo much.

Anonymous said...

Repeats what Andrew said.

So, I was a bit confused by the truck sequence...can you reexplain that?

Anonymous said...

wait. i'm confused. what happened to Rebecca. was she in the plan to kill VOAH or was she trying to help him. i'm so confused. and what was w/ the truck.

i thought we told you to write an up lifter.

Anonymous said...

i agree with Jen...
pretty picture
did u write the song?
good story
WHEEEEEEEEE

Ali said...

um, what's there to be confused about?

He jumped.

Out of a moving van.

And started bleeding.

Picture contracts nicley with story, btw. Forgot to mention this due to extreme depression over voah's complete and total lack of luck.

All those who wish to join the Hug Voah club, say aye.

Aye!

Anonymous said...

the song is from garden state. what do you people listen to?

Raptor said...

Bands other than Garden State.

Sam, how do you get the chapters in Anonymous to post sequentially in chronological order. I can't do that w/More Than a Job Any technical help you could provide would be invaluable!

Abby said...

I think she means the Garden State soundtrack, as in a movie, not a band.

Molly said...

your the meanest of the mean

your too samish to understand suliminal messages

Ali said...

BONJOURNO

and no one has joined the "Give Voah a Hug" club.

if i hugged voah, he would shoot me. But that doesnt change the fact that i shall hug him anyways!

Anonymous said...

fine.
is the poetry thing good or bad?

Anonymous said...

that's a really nice cherry picture..that really doesn't match the story/chapter..at all, lol.

Anonymous said...

AHAHAHA, i wrote CHERRY! AS IN THE FRUIT!!..yeah i meant cheery

Anonymous said...

I love your picture. It makes me want to go outside and have a good stare up at the trees.

Anonymous said...

soooooooooooooooooo
i like how you can get 20 some comments by posting 2 words and a picture...
and i friended on xanga.
wheeeee

Anonymous said...

and i meant that you and i did most of the work. ish. yea. well i meant that i did about as much as you and i was assistant so together we did most of the work but it counts more for me.
or
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i'm done

Anonymous said...

so- when are newsies audtitions???

Ali said...

sam needs to post. and you know it's bad when I tell you that.

Anonymous said...

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☺☻♥♠♣◘

Anonymous said...

Seeing as Voah is nowhere to be found, I'll let you know that Anonymous is Jeff.

Anonymous said...

Jeff B/Spartan, that is.

Anonymous said...

it's been one week...