Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Scenes 2

These posts are fun for me, but if you guys don't like them, let me know. Alternatively, feel free to write your own in the comment section.

We are on a balcony fifteen floors up and I'm looking at the street and you're looking at the moon and I say I like being this high up and you say, I've been higher.

I am hanging my jacket up on a hook and you tell me you have a thing but that it can wait until I am hooked and I say I am already hooked and you say your jacket is not hooked and I say I know.

You are smiling and smiling but then suddenly you are not smiling you are falling and your face has that look on it that says I am not smiling I am falling but I am there, for once in my thoroughly uneventful life I am there in front of you and I grab your arms and steady you so that you are not falling you are smiling and I look you in the eye and say are you okay [I have waited my whole life for that to happen] and you give this tiny little sigh and say: yes.


Frances said...

ouch that picture looks really painful >.<

awww about the scenes. I didn't really understand the 2nd one though.

Jedi_Raptor07 said...

Ouch indeed.

I personally enjoy the scenes. Keep at 'em.


Jeff said...

Very interesting.


Carissa said...

veryyy painful looking picture... i agree

Anonymous said...

your writing style reminds me of john green's. that is a good thing.

A close relative said...

Personally, I love these. Helps I think that I have ADD.

charlotte said...

Gross picture is gross.

The Muffin Man. said...

It's a boo boo! :D

Abby said...

Your posts are great, Sam. No hyperbole, either; they are literally great. I guess if anything is frustrating, it's that we never learn the endings of your stories. I always want to know what happens to all these characters.