Monday, August 10, 2009

A Pantoum for The Imperfect Layout

It was, in the end, just
for a disc, but
he loved it
so, once. He laid out

for a disc, but
it escaped his hand.
So once he laid out
but he missed. Because he dived too late,

it escaped his hand.
He loved it
but he missed because he dived too late.
It was, in the end, just.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

impressive! another new direction.

Esteban said...

Pantoums! I haven't seen one of those since 8th grade!

Anonymous said...

it only lacks a photo